Thursday, 10 March 2016

The skeleton



The skeleton tries to escape
the twigs but they stop him
from moving

the twigs are pinching in his back he is  and misrule he doesn't like it and the

butterfly are buzzing around him and the twigs are cracking around him

like sticks.

When did it happen?
How did he get there?
Why is the skeleton there?

4 comments:

  1. I really love the strong words like the butterflies buzzing try to pot them in the next poem too. Good story

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  2. I really like the way you said it tries to escape. And the twigs are cracking around him like sticks.and the twigs are pinching in his back.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

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  3. I love the strong words like the butterflies buzzing try to pot it in the next pome great story

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  4. I really like the way you said it tries to escape.and the twigs are cracking around him like sticks. And the twigs are pinching in his back๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

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